This essay is mainly about the solution of the hcp draft(viral misinformation) the prompt is the file below and my hcp draft is below too
this is the advice teacher gives to me: Who are advocates currently working on this issue? What are their arguments? You need to engage them directly. Be sure to ground all claims in evidence or argument and provide sources for the info you share. You make a ton of claims backed by little to no argumentation or evidence. Proofread. Revise for grammar and sentence eloquence. Keep an eye out for unnecessary repetition. And keep an eye on word choice. Give your structure and transitions another look, particularly in your presentation of history.