Peer Review two essay

I’m working on a English exercise and need support.

essay I will send a doc

  1. What is the thesis? Is it clear in the paper?
  2. Does the introduction get your attention? How? Can it be improved?
  3. Does each paragraph have a topic sentence?
  4. Does each paragraph have support/evidence? (Descriptive language)
  5. Are there strong/interesting transitions? Circle the transitions. Does the essay flow or is it stilted?
  6. Does the essay have a strong conclusion? Does the author prove his/her thesis?
  7. What part of the essay do you think is least effective and needs work? Please make helpful suggestions for improvement.
  8. What part do you think is most effective? Explain why.
  9. Is the paper MLA formatted?
 
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